Retcon Vera

It's weird that this is not RenPy. No ability to rollback to re-read, the UI is clunky compared to the dated yet simple. No way to scroll past what you've already seen, or back to re-read something you've missed. I stopped trying to explore when I understood that a second playthrough would be a chore.

Amazing game! The story is wonderful and heartwarming, better than every game I’ve played so far! What surprised me the most was that Vera still chose to love the protagonist in the end. That line “But in the end…what I've enjoyed the most,is…you!” left my heart feeling all sweet long after I finished playing! Thank you so much to the creator, I’m looking forward to your fantastic future works!

This is certainly an amazing game you created! The results speak for yourself and I'm looking forward to the next game of ours.

Wonderful!

Honestly, while I like a lot about this game I do have one big issue with it. That being the player character.

Considering the fact that Vera can literally rewrite history and with how fast she spirals into an addiction to growing, it's weird how unconcerned the player character is. He's pretty much just a complete yes-man for Vera.

Like at at the beginning Vera hides the true extent of her plan to grow, she esentially lies and tries to brush it off, and the player just doesn't care?

There's never a point where he tries to reign Vera in, points out how crazy her addiction to growing got, or tries to convince her to create some kind of fail save in case she goes overboard.

It's always just 'Vera would do it anyway, so why bother?' or 'That's so you, Vera, go for it!' which is just pretty shitty behavior for someone who should be a good friend of hers.

will there be a downloadeble version?

can you make a downloadable version always drop out on me at random points 

I don't mean any offense but do different choices lead to anything? I just expected slightly different transformations based on dialogue choices I guess.

Glad to find this despite the lack of tags!

 I noticed that right before and after transformation 2 there are a bunch of missing assets, and I don't know if that is just a me issue.

Man, another masterpiece. I really enjoyed it mate, congrats on the project. Keep it up, cause you're doing great obviously! 🙏🏼🤠

Looking great so far! Any plans for futa content?

The new content is great, and I'm looking forward to seeing what the fifth and final stage will look like, and what it means for their relationship.

If you added Stage 4, then whatever trigger you put in isn't working because it just ends the story after the transformation.

Stage 4 its just an sneak peak right? Because it says stage 4 its already ingame but its just the game end screen

on track to be one of the best in the genre......keep it up mate...

Hi, I wrote to you in DMs on deviant art about the bug

Does the story continue in the newer Update?

There seems to be some images missing around Stage 3's retcon, and during the gym.

This is really cool, though one thing I actually want to suggest is a way to go back a post (or show the keyboard controls for it in settings) so that way we can save before a decision comes up.  At current there's no way to save on the screen a decision pop up is prompted.

Hola, nose mucho del tema, los diálogos están en un archivo de texto? Si es así se podría traducir con algún LLM y crear un archivo en varios idiomas y poder seleccionar entre español/inglés/otro?

This is genuinely peak. However a way to go back and a downloadable version would be really good for the user experience. Other than that, keep it up, it is fantastic so far!

What a fun story concept you have here, and i would love to see so much more from this VN and hope it's not only just FMG since time manipulation does give you a lot of ways for how the character could manipulate a persons past to alter them in the present

Dude this is looking awesome, did you make the engine yourself? Its pretty smooth.

Great work so far I’m looking forward to it how big she’s gonna be in the future

If only Mordin Solus had a sister😁

It looks really cool, promising, and very high-quality! I really hope the novella will be finished and won't suffer the same fate as other projects in this genre

Did you use AI for the writing?

Great game thus far! One minor problem I encountered is that I couldn't full screen the game so a lot of the dialog just went over my head since I couldn't see it (perhaps some form of history feature might help. Idk). Beyond that, great game and I am interested to see where it goes.

So far, this is pretty promising. The story hook is unique and I'd love to see where it goes. I particularly like how Vera as a character is motivated both by scientific insight and personal desire.

I'm interested wether this game is going to have branching paths or not, based on the couple of choices we already have. It's also going to be quite nice to have all the backgrounds and character sprites added that are missing as of now. If I'm allowed to make a suggestion, I'd really appreciate a larger font size for easier reading.

All in all though, this is a really nice proof of concept for a game that will be very enjoyable once you're able to work on it a little more.  Please keep at it!