Retcon Vera

If you added Stage 4, then whatever trigger you put in isn't working because it just ends the story after the transformation.

Stage 4 its just an sneak peak right? Because it says stage 4 its already ingame but its just the game end screen

on track to be one of the best in the genre......keep it up mate...

Hi, I wrote to you in DMs on deviant art about the bug

Does the story continue in the newer Update?

There seems to be some images missing around Stage 3's retcon, and during the gym.

This is really cool, though one thing I actually want to suggest is a way to go back a post (or show the keyboard controls for it in settings) so that way we can save before a decision comes up.  At current there's no way to save on the screen a decision pop up is prompted.

Hola, nose mucho del tema, los diálogos están en un archivo de texto? Si es así se podría traducir con algún LLM y crear un archivo en varios idiomas y poder seleccionar entre español/inglés/otro?

This is genuinely peak. However a way to go back and a downloadable version would be really good for the user experience. Other than that, keep it up, it is fantastic so far!

What a fun story concept you have here, and i would love to see so much more from this VN and hope it's not only just FMG since time manipulation does give you a lot of ways for how the character could manipulate a persons past to alter them in the present

Dude this is looking awesome, did you make the engine yourself? Its pretty smooth.

Great work so far I’m looking forward to it how big she’s gonna be in the future

If only Mordin Solus had a sister😁

It looks really cool, promising, and very high-quality! I really hope the novella will be finished and won't suffer the same fate as other projects in this genre

Did you use AI for the writing?

Great game thus far! One minor problem I encountered is that I couldn't full screen the game so a lot of the dialog just went over my head since I couldn't see it (perhaps some form of history feature might help. Idk). Beyond that, great game and I am interested to see where it goes.

So far, this is pretty promising. The story hook is unique and I'd love to see where it goes. I particularly like how Vera as a character is motivated both by scientific insight and personal desire.

I'm interested wether this game is going to have branching paths or not, based on the couple of choices we already have. It's also going to be quite nice to have all the backgrounds and character sprites added that are missing as of now. If I'm allowed to make a suggestion, I'd really appreciate a larger font size for easier reading.

All in all though, this is a really nice proof of concept for a game that will be very enjoyable once you're able to work on it a little more.  Please keep at it!